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What did you like best about this piece of writing? Find and record the descriptive words you liked.
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Choose a sentence that you enjoyed and tell why you liked it.
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Is there something in the writing that's confusing? If so, how can it be improved?
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Where would you like more detail to appear in this piece of writing?
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Does this piece of writing begin in an interesting manner? If not, how can it be improved?
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